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    • The only answer she got was a suresignacion sigh.
    • Even I could feel that the cooker's answer hadn't been enough for her, but she decided not to keep arguing.
    • The maids were like that: quiet, trying to not draw the attention over themselves, amd very respectful to their superiors.
    • The truth is that most of the times I wasn't able to difference them, since they all wore the same uniform and had the same manners which tryied to be elegant but which never rose to the challenge of my social class' ones.

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    • Even I could feel that the cooker's answer hadn't been enough for her, but she decided not to keep arguing.
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    • Even I could feel that the cooker's answer hadn't been enough for her, but she decided not to keep arguing.
    • Even I could feel that the cooker's answer hadn't been enough for her, but she decided not to keep arguing.
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    • The maids were like that: quiet, trying to not draw the attention over themselves, amd very respectful to their superiors.
      투표하세요!
    • The maids were like that: quiet, trying to not to draw the attention overtowards themselves, amnd very respectful to their superiors.
    • The maids were like that:; quiet, trying to not draw too muche attention tover themselves, amd. They were always very respectful to their superiors.
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    • The truth is that most of the times I wasn't able to difference them, since they all wore the same uniform and had the same manners which tryied to be elegant but which never rose to the challenge of my social class' ones.
      투표하세요!
    • The truth is that most of the times I wasn't able to differencetiate between them, since they all wore the same uniform and had the same manners which tryied to belooked elegant but which never rose to the challenge of my social class' ones.
    • The truth is that, most of the times I wasn't able to differenctiate them, since they all wore the same uniform and hadbehaved in the same manners which. They always tryied to be elegant, but which never rose to the challengenever quite lived up to the expectations of my social class' ones.
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