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After high school - gymnasium, i˙m graduate on Economy faculty, department of Marketing.
- Now, i looking for a job.
- In free time i go on fitness, dancing and reading books.
- Also I go on curse of italian language.

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- After high school - gymnasium, i˙m graduate on Economy faculty, department of Marketing.
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- Now, i looking for a job.
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- Now~~, i~~ I am looking for a job.
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- In free time i go on fitness, dancing and reading books.
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- In ~~free time i go on~~my spare time I do fitness, danc~~ing~~e and read~~ing~~ books.
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- Also I go on curse of italian language.
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- Also I go on curse of italian language. ¶(I am also attending at Italian classes)¶¶PS: a curse is really bad!!! I think you mean course :-)
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