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THE RIVER
When we had not yet awakened, the building was just the building and the street alone the street.
But when the exercise with the sagacious teacher suddenly woke up once, the building was not building and the river was not the river, the meadow was not green or red flower.
But if we keep progressing on the path of ascension and we reached the bottom and origin, then the mountain was again mountains and the river is again river it is green meadow and red flower.

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문장 1
- When we had not yet awakened, the building was just the building and the street alone the street.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- But when the exercise with the sagacious teacher suddenly woke up once, the building was not building and the river was not the river, the meadow was not green or red flower.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- But if we keep progressing on the path of ascension and we reached the bottom and origin, then the mountain was again mountains and the river is again river it is green meadow and red flower.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3