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    • silly doctors.

    • Today there was a humble man asked me that"where the doctors my son is sick , I want the doctors to examin him) I gesture at the doctors room, but the man said"I enter this room and I found people laughing and ignore me" I became angry from their silly and rude attitude.
  • I went with the man to their room and forced them to do their work.
    • after that when I recall what happened I wonder why this people do that?
    • why didn't they do they work?
    • why they deal with poor man by this way even they treat the rich people in good way?

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    • Today there was a humble man asked me that"where the doctors my son is sick , I want the doctors to examin him) I gesture at the doctors room, but the man said"I enter this room and I found people laughing and ignore me" I became angry from their silly and rude attitude.
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    • Today there was a humble man asked me that"w"Where are the doctors m? My son is sick ,¶.I want the doctors to examine him)".¶I gesture atpointed to the doctors' room, b.But the man said "I entered this room and, I found people laughing and they ignored me". ¶I became angry fromabout their silly and rude attitude.
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    • Today there was a humble man who asked me that"whe, "Where are the doctors m? My son is sick. ,¶I want the doctors to examine him)¶I gesture at". I pointed towards the doctor's room, but the man said, "I enter this room and. I found people laughing and they ignored me". I became angry fromregarding their silly and rude attitude.
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    • why they deal with poor man by this way even they treat the rich people in good way?
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    • ¶wWhy they deal wiact this way towards the poor man by this way even theyand treat the rich people in good way? ¶
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    • ¶why they deal with poor man by this way even they trWhy do they give good service to rich people but then dealt the rich people in good way? with the poor man in an unacceptable manner?
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