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Hi, my name is Fernanda, I want to learn English but I have to practice, I study Computer Engineering....
I would like to be friends and to exchange culture and knowledge.
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句子 1
- Hi, my name is Fernanda, I want to learn English but I have to practice, I study Computer Engineering....
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I would like to be friends and to exchange culture and knowledge.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Thank you for read my writing
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