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  • Advantages of spending public money on space exploration

  • Note before the actual writing: "This is an essay written with a given topic, so the opinions expressed aren't always my own opinions." Space exploration is a vague topic.
  • Do scientists actually know what they are doing?
  • Although it is being criticised, spending public money on space exploration also has some great advantages.
  • Since the world's population is increasingly growing, we ultimately have to find alternative areas to house everyone.
  • Space exploration offers the opportunity to discover new planets on which the human kind may live sustainably.
    • If you take in consideration that it is the task of the national governments to offer a sustainable live to everyone, it is not a bad idea to search for new places to live elsewhere in the universe.
  • Since the national governments are involved in the issue of an increasing population, spending public money on space exploration is not a bad idea at all.
  • Another advantage of spending public money on space exploration is the collaboration between different countries in order to gain further understanding of the universe.
    • In this era of globalisation such an opportunity to strengthening bounds between countries must not be ignored.
  • Not only do we tackle a social problem with this solution, but we also get a better understanding of the universe surrounding us.
    • Whilst taking in consideration to spend public money on space explorations, I believe favourable consideration should be given to the scientists who want to discover new places to live for human kind.
    • The lack of collaboration between certain countries of course is a problem, but I believe that the overpopulation is a more severe issue.

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    • Note before the actual writing: "This is an essay written with a given topic, so the opinions expressed aren't always my own opinions." Space exploration is a vague topic.
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    • If you take in consideration that it is the task of the national governments to offer a sustainable live to everyone, it is not a bad idea to search for new places to live elsewhere in the universe.
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    • If you take in consideration that it is the task of the national governments to offer a sustainable livfe tofor everyone, it is not a bad idea to search for new places to live elsewhere in the universe.
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    • If you take into consideration that it is the task of the national governments to offer a sustainable livfe tofor everyone, it is not a bad idea to search for new places to live elsewhere in the universe.
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    • Since the national governments are involved in the issue of an increasing population, spending public money on space exploration is not a bad idea at all.
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    • Another advantage of spending public money on space exploration is the collaboration between different countries in order to gain further understanding of the universe.
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    • Whilst taking in consideration to spend public money on space explorations, I believe favourable consideration should be given to the scientists who want to discover new places to live for human kind.
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    • Whilst taking into consideration to spend public money on space explorations, I believe favourable consideration should be given to the scientists who want to discover new places to live for human kind.
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    • The lack of collaboration between certain countries of course is a problem, but I believe that the overpopulation is a more severe issue.
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    • The lack of collaboration between certain countries of course is a problem, but I believe that the overpopulation is a more severe issue.
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