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    • WORKING CHILDREN

    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems of working children are the negative and physical and psychological effects on children.
    • Nowadays, many children are exposed to dangerous conditions due to lack of security in the place’s work while they do manual labors and received poor remuneration.
    • At the same time, they don’t do activities of children and they have a different perception of reality by influence’s adults.

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    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems of working children are the negative and physical and psychological effects on children.
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    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems of working children are the negative and, physical and psychological effects on childrenthem.
    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems of working children arechild labor is the negative and, physical and psychological effects on children.
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    • Nowadays, many children are exposed to dangerous conditions due to lack of security in the place’s work while they do manual labors and received poor remuneration.
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    • Nowadays, many children are exposed to the dangerous conditions due to lack of security in the place’s workir workplace while they do manual labors and received poor remuneration.
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    • At the same time, they don’t do activities of children and they have a different perception of reality by influence’s adults.
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    • At the same time, they don’t do activities of children and they have a different perception of reality by influence’s of adults.
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