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- Hi everyone
- Hi everyone, I'm Jhordy.
- I'm 22 and I'm from Perú.
- I'm study International business managment since 4 years ago and I love it.
- Well, my english is so bad, I'd like to practice my skins and pronunciation too.

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- Hi everyone
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- Hi e, Everyone!
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- Hi everyone, I'm Jhordy.
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- Hi, everyone,. I'm Jhordy.
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- I'm 22 and I'm from Perú.
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- I'm 22twenty-two, and I'm from Perúu.
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- I'm 22 years old and I'm from Perú.
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- I'm study International business managment since 4 years ago and I love it.
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- I'mve been studying International business management since 4 years ago and I love it.
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- I'mve been study Iing international business management ~~since 4~~for four years ~~ago~~now, and I love it.
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- Well, my english is so bad, I'd like to practice my skins and pronunciation too.
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- Well, since my eEnglish is so bad, I'd like to practice my skinlls and pronunciation too.
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