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  • Essay

  • Hello, I'm preparing for my English exams now, so I need your help.
  • Please, tell me if there are mistakes in the essay!
    • Some people think that one who is speaking a foreign language fluently can easily teach it, but others do not agree with such an opinion.
  • Let me start by considering some facts.
  • To begin with, this theme is quite popular and has many points of view.
  • Personally, I think that teaching any foreign language is more difficult than it seems.
    • Firstly, one should have knowledge in such spheres as grammar rules, pronunciation and so on.
    • Secondly, teaching needs such characteristics as kindness and patience, as the process can be quite nervous.
    • Thirdly, nobody can teach successfully without attending courses of teaching and gaining needed experience.
    • However, many people think that fluency in talking is enough for teaching.
    • They are sure that the ability of talking in a foreign language is the level that shows one’s competence in teaching.
    • Nevertheless, I think that teaching is very complicated and difficult process and fluency in speaking is only one part of the knowledge, which one should gain for teaching.
  • All in all, it is up to everybody whether to consider a fluently speaking person to be competent enough to teach others or not.
    • I am still in favor of the idea that it is preferable to find a teacher with needed education and knowledges in the sphere of teaching.

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