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  • Please correct me. Thank you so much.

    • Today, I had 2 stars because I finished all my homework by myself.
    • In the afternoon, I learnt many books.
    • I bought a caramen to eat while I wait my brother.
    • Then I came home and had dinner.
  • I was home alone with my cousin.
    • I woke up at 7 a.m and ate noodle.
    • I have a new ticket from the noodle bag.
    • I learnt many homework and I ate some candies.
  • In the afternoon, I woke up at 2 p.m and drank some water.
    • I made some homework and drank juice after that.
  • Then I took a bath.

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