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  • My plan

    • Firstly, I did not expect my results.
    • I realize that I wasted too much.
    • Then, I can understood I can save.
  • I should start somewhere.
    • So, I am planning to start to change something at home.
  • Firstly I will change my light bulbs.
    • It will usefull both our pocket and envirioment.
    • Secondly, I will try to reduce the using of car.
    • Unfortunately, my home far from the city center.
    • In the winter, I usually drive to school because of the heavy rains and perishing cold, but according to my plans I will reduce the amount of miles sharply just because of holiday and the season.
    • In my short term plan, replacing my refligator or windows with ENERGY STAR may not be possible.
    • Because it will be costly but if I have chance I will replace them.In addition, recyling is realy important issue for me.
    • I have never wasted them.
    • It is impressive that something can use second time.
    • For example, the metarials like paper, plastics, glass are recyling and using to build prefabricated buildings.
    • Also, I care about the business which is using recyled products.
    • For instance, my new hairdresser salon is using recling products so, it is is the one of the reason that why I prefer this place.
    • Thus, my results show that I can reduce my carbon footprint at least %20.

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