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    • Hi, Tuesday I saw a play of my college I will tell you that it was....
    • The play was about five children who playing showed the pain suffred by country for the war with the farc.
    • The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. the kids was jumping the rope and they sing.
    • In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and He think that it is a toy, His mother a scolds He.In the fourth chapter a kid die and his friend can´t see.
    • His friend play and he cry why they don´t see.In the chapter final the kid reborn and his friends help him.
    • The message is that the war is a problem that involves the childhood the my country I never saw a play in my life but is fun totally

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    • The play was about five children who playing showed the pain suffred by country for the war with the farc.
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    • The play was about five children who were playing.It showed the pain suffered by country for the war with the faorce.
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    • The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. the kids was jumping the rope and they sing.
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    • The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. tThe kids wasere jumping on the rope and they ssinging.
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    • In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and He think that it is a toy, His mother a scolds He.In the fourth chapter a kid die and his friend can´t see.
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    • In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and Hhe thinkought that it is a toy,. His mother a scolds Hehim.In the fourth chapter a kid dies and his friend can´t see.
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    • His friend play and he cry why they don´t see.In the chapter final the kid reborn and his friends help him.
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    • His friends play and he cryies, why they don´t seeknow.In the final chapter final the kid is reborn and his friends help him.
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    • The message is that the war is a problem that involves the childhood the my country I never saw a play in my life but is fun totally
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    • The message is that the war is a problem that involveaffects the childhood thelike in my country ¶¶I never saw a play in my life but iwas fun totally ¶¶
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