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    • Before to go out I write the shopping list.It is an habit because not always I remember that I must pay.
    • It depens if I don't lost the piece of paper on the table.So funny.After in the supermarket I must remember that I wrote in the paper.Surely it will miss one or two things of the list.I believe that there are frenetic days because I sometimes haven't any time to breathe but it is normal when we are occuped in important things.I hate the idlers persons.It is correct to spend time for necessary and serious occupation.
    • Obviously there are relaxing moment with my family.They are my happiness.

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    • It depens if I don't lost the piece of paper on the table.So funny.After in the supermarket I must remember that I wrote in the paper.Surely it will miss one or two things of the list.I believe that there are frenetic days because I sometimes haven't any time to breathe but it is normal when we are occuped in important things.I hate the idlers persons.It is correct to spend time for necessary and serious occupation.
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    • It depends if I don't loste the piece of paper on the table.So funny.After that in the supermarket I must remember twhat I wrote in the paper.Surely itI will miss one or two things ofin the list. I believe that there are frenetic days because I sometimes don't haven't any time to breathe but it is normal when we are occupied in important things.I hate the idlers persons.It is correct to spend time for necessary and serious occupation.
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