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從Rolax來的文本 - English

  • Photoshoot

    • Yesterday I had a blast shooting with these two beautiful girls.
    • (here I'm talking about two girls, mother and daughter).
    • We laugh so much until our stomach heart.
    • Eventhought they have never model before, they we're two natural person in front of a camera.

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