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    • The reason why I traveled to Spain.

    • I traveled to Spain in 2014 and it was the most beautiful experiencie that I have lived in my whole life.
    • I went with my parents, my sister and my grandparents.
    • We visited Spain because it was a dream for my grandfather.
    • His parents were from Málaga and he wanted to know that place, so we went for make his dream come true.
    • He was very excited and I'm sure that he will never forget it.
    • Thanks everyone and please forgive the mistakes in this text :)

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