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- Could you make correct my sentences ?
- i ssuppose a perfect day must be included jogging ,doing sports, taking rest in short part of day.
- On the other hand meeting friends could be good on your perfect day.

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- Could you make correct my sentences ?
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- Could you ~~mak~~please correct my sentences ?
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- i ssuppose a perfect day must be included jogging ,doing sports, taking rest in short part of day.
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- ~~i s~~I suppose a perfect day for me must be included jogging , doing sports, and taking some rest ~~in short part of day~~once in a while.
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- ~~i s~~I suppose a perfect day ~~must be~~is a day includeding jogging ,doing sports, and taking a rest in ~~short~~a part of the day.
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- On the other hand meeting friends could be good on your perfect day.
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- On the other hand, meeting with friends could ~~be good on your perfect day~~also make your day even better. ¶
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- On the other hand, meeting friends could be good on your perfect day. ¶
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