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    • the advantages or disadvantages of researching on the Internet?

    • The advantages of using the Internet to research is that there are lots of pages with information about the topic are you looking for.
    • But there is a very important disadvantage, most of pages that you find are incomplete or they have mistaken information.
    • So you have to read too much for finding the better page or for joining the sections that you like more.
    • Or you can visit official sites or sites of organizations which work about the topic you want.

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    • The advantages of using the Internet to research is that there are lots of pages with information about the topic are you looking for.
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    • ThFirst, one advantages of using the Internet toas a research tool is that there are a lots of webpages with information about the topic are youyou are looking for.
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    • The advantages of using the Internet to research is that there are lots of pages with information about the topic are youyou are looking for.
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    • But there is a very important disadvantage, most of pages that you find are incomplete or they have mistaken information.
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    • But there is a very importann, the other side of it disadvantage, most of pages that you find are incomplete or they have mistaken that some of the webpages are incomplete and do not contain the right information.
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    • But there is a very important disadvantage, most of pages that you find are incomplete or they have mistakenincorrect information.
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    • So you have to read too much for finding the better page or for joining the sections that you like more.
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    • So you have to readAnd because of it, you will be spending too much forin finding thea better page or for joiningeven going further for the sections that you likefind more beneficial.
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    • So you have to read too much for finding the better pages or for joining the sections that you like more.
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    • Or you can visit official sites or sites of organizations which work about the topic you want.
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    • Or you canTo make sure you got the right information from the Internet, you should visit official sites or sites of organizsations which work about the topic you wantthat concentrates about the related topic that you are looking for.
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    • Or you can visit official websites or websites of organizations which work about the topic you want.
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