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MY LITTLE TRAVEL
HI EVERYBODY, MY NAME IS ALEJO...
I AM TRAVELING FOR THE WORLD AND I WANNA KNOW MORE PERSONS AROUND THE WORLD AND I THINK THAT ENGLISH LANGUAGE IS VERY IMPORTANT IN THIS CENTURY... GREETING!!

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标题
- MY LITTLE TRAVEL
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- HI EVERYBODY, MY NAME IS ALEJO...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I AM TRAVELING FOR THE WORLD AND I WANNA KNOW MORE PERSONS AROUND THE WORLD AND I THINK THAT ENGLISH LANGUAGE IS VERY IMPORTANT IN THIS CENTURY... GREETING!!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2