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從Edwinb來的文本 - English

    • My adventure in the language english

    • My adventure start in my room, when i am learning english. i like learning new things and have challenges, I like that help me to learning more for learn more speed, I appreciate your help and I hope not be ignored

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    • My adventure start in my room, when i am learning english. i like learning new things and have challenges, I like that help me to learning more for learn more speed, I appreciate your help and I hope not be ignored
      赶紧投票吧！
    • My adventure starts in my room, when ire I am learning eEnglish. iI like learning new things and haveing challenges, I like that help me to learning more foryou are helping me to learn more speed, I appreciate your help and I hope to not be ignored
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      赶紧投票吧！
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