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Text from Jane_jane94 - English

    • Please help me to to tell a story in indirect speech.

    • turn into indirect speech.
    • the story about a young man Dorian Gray whose physical appearance is handsome and innocent.
  • An aspiring artist paints a beautiful portrait of Dorian.
    • Dorian wishes that he always look like his youthful appearance in the portrait.
  • The wish comes true.
    • Dorian remains the same – youthful and charming, but the portrait begins to transform itself into the image of his soul.
    • He uses his good looks and charm to obtain whatever he desires in life.
  • His insensitivity drives a friend to suicide.
    • The evil desires of his heart eventually cause him to murder a friend in cold blood.
  • Over a period of twenty years, Dorian becomes a monster on the inside (reflected by the portrait of his soul) even as he remains youthful and innocent on the outside.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English