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  • Le Tout Nouveau Testament

    • What if God lived in Brussels?
  • And he wasn't good.
  • He liked alcohol, crackers and football.
  • He wasn't too smart.
  • He tyrannized his wife and daughter, but he was even worse with his earthly children.
    • What if because of him they had a lot of problems?
    • I liked one idea of this film.
    • The protagonist of the film, the god daughter, made mailing with dates of death of all people on earth.
  • What about we all knew our dates of death?
  • How would this information change our lives.
  • "Le Tout Nouveau Testament" wasn't the best movie I've ever seen, but, at least, it wasn't boring.
    • But I wouldn't recommend it for too religious people without any critical thinking.

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