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  • About CV...

  • Hi everyone!
  • I wish you read and correct an extract from my CV to see if you understand this (this / it / that ?).
  • It's about designer experience so there are many technical words.
  • For each job, there is the name of position held and a list of descriptions below it. Good luck!
  • About education.
  • # Professional Licence in Mechanical Design and Projects.
  • # BTS Design and Industrialization in Microtechnology.
  • # BAC STI Mechanical Engineering in Industrial Engineering.
  • About work experiences.
  • # Designer : - production of 3D CAD models and 2D drawing in the field of boating (plumbing, locksmith, furniture, composite) - update of machining files.
  • # Design office technician : - design of armoring product for cash transportation - industrialization.
  • # Designer and Programmer : - creation of first process for quote - making of appropriate procedures according to specifications and feasibility - viewing of the project at the customer - design of tools and associated document - improvement of working post - building of instructions.
  • Other work experiences.
  • # Commercial employee : - shelf placement - care of floor - customer advice.
  • # Seasonal worker : - preparation of parts before painting - machining process and packaging - control and touch-ups of parts.
  • # Seasonal employee in gas station : - customer service - miscellaneous cleaning (vehicle and workshop) - car maintenance

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English