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  • A story from a song 'Brick Shithouse' [2]

  • I keep walking, floating as if I never stop.
  • My body see the breeze, smell the fog and hear the sound of drifting clouds.
  • Nobody is in the field.
  • My body made all of them go?
  • Now I feel the smell of something familiar.
  • I move my body to the place where it tell.
  • Everything feels strange to me until now, but this is the only thing I feel familiar.
  • I come across a house and come into it.
  • I see a man reading in bed and look around the house.
  • I still feel something.
  • My eyes barely try to look around to find something.
  • Please, the eyes.
  • I can't move my eyes but to hope they will.
  • Please do something.
  • Like you drop the tears.
  • My body wants (to see) something hidden.
  • Don't feel with the body any more, see with the eyes now.
  • And I see my girl walking into the room.
  • She gets into bed and kiss him.
  • I turn around, leave the room and come out.
  • I wish I'd never met her.
  • ​ Now I'm standing in the backyard staring at the brick shithouse and find my eyes deelpy dented down with blood covering and running my face.
  • [~find blood covering my face and running from my eyes that deeply dented down.]

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