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Сообщение от nelling - English

  • A story from a song 'Brick Shithouse' [1]

  • I'm a man killed.
  • I don't remember anything about my death.
    • All I know is I'm killed by a man whose face I don't remember in a brick shithouse [Or A man killed me whose face I don't remember.] Now my body's up and wandering around in the air.
  • God blessed me.
  • God gave me a chance to see something I didn't know before.
  • I float in the air to know what I don't know.
  • I first go to my house.
  • Nothing changed in the house.
  • I move my body to the kitchen. Silence.
  • I don't feel silence, now I see the silence.
    • I leave the kitchen to move other room looking around slowly.
  • Mum, your son is here with the soundless body.
  • Try to feel me, not to see me.
  • Now this is how[Or the way] you see me.
  • You still left my broken old LP player in place.
  • As if i'm alive.
  • I come out of the house.
  • I see a train coming toward me.
  • Why the train doesn't stop.
  • Here I am in front of [Or before] it.
  • I recall one of my friends who killed himself without his two legs after a train accident.
  • My friend, I'm standing right in front of a train with two legs and it passes through me.
  • What's the difference.
  • Now I'm still alive with the dead body, but you killed your breathing body.
  • I leave with my body behind the rail.
  • Lord, I still can walk, think, remember and cry like now.
  • What's it if it isn't tears running my cheeks?
  • I think to myself staring at the broken corss on the top of the church for ahead.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English