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    • i want to speak a good english!need help

    • hi everyone!is me!
    • today,i will go to the beach with friends!im presently in hollydays in caraib with my family!the temperature is 28° and the water of the beach is so hot!yesterday,i stay in the beach all the day because i was in paris and it was so coold.i like my job,my family and my life,juste want complete the english language to make my life parfaite!
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    • today,i will go to the beach with friends!im presently in hollydays in caraib with my family!the temperature is 28° and the water of the beach is so hot!yesterday,i stay in the beach all the day because i was in paris and it was so coold.i like my job,my family and my life,juste want complete the english language to make my life parfaite!
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    • today,i will go to the beatch with friends !im presently in hollydays in caraib with my family!the temperature is 28° and the water of the beach is so hot!yesterday,i stay in the beach all the day because i was in paris and it was so coold.i like my job,my family and my life,juste want complete the english language to make my life parfaite!
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    • ¶tToday,i I will go to the beach with friends!i I'm presently ion hollyidays in cCaraib with my family!t. The temperature is 28° and the water ofat the beach is so hot!y Yesterday,i I stay ined at the beach all the day because iI was in paris and it was so coold.i I like my job, my family, and my life,. I juste want to complete the english language to make my life paerfaiteect!
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