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    • Today is 2th December, at morning, Xiomy my girlfriend got at my home, and we had a breakfast.
    • The breakfast was, orange's juice, bread, fruit cup (apple, pear, strawberries, papaya, almonds, bananas, cherries, peaches, mango and grapes).
    • Later, we lie down, and saw the t.v. but later we saw clips online, when she got bored, we went to ride the bicycles.
    • Now, she come back her home to lunch, Now, I go to buy a perfume for her.
    • the weather is warm, I want that we will go to eat ice cream.

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    • Today is 2th December, at morning, Xiomy my girlfriend got at my home, and we had a breakfast.
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    • Today is 2th December, at morning, Xiomy my girlfriend gotcame at my home,place and we had a breakfast.
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    • Today is 2th December, at morning, Xiomy my girlfriend got atwent to my homeuse , and we had asome breakfast.
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    • Today is 2the 2nd (second) of December, at. This morning, Xiomy, my girlfriend got at my home, and we had a breakfast.
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    • Today is 2th December, at morning, Xiomy my girlfriend got at my home, and we had a breakfast.¶¶Today is December 2nd. In the morning, Xiomy my girlfriend, arrived at my house and we had breakfest.¶Today is 2nd December, this morning my girlfriend Xiomy came to my house, an we had (some) breakfest.
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    • The breakfast was, orange's juice, bread, fruit cup (apple, pear, strawberries, papaya, almonds, bananas, cherries, peaches, mango and grapes).
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    • TheFor breakfast was,e had orange's juice, bread, fruit cup (apple, pear, strawberries, papaya, almonds, bananas, cherries, peaches, mango and grapes).
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    • Later, we lie down, and saw the t.v. but later we saw clips online, when she got bored, we went to ride the bicycles.
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    • Later, we lieay down, and sawwatched the t.v. but later we sawwatched clips online, when she got bored, we went to ride the bicycles.
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    • LaAfter, breakfast we lieay down, and saw the t.v. but later we saw clips online, when shewatched TV. Later we watched some clips online. When Xiomy got bored, we went to ride theand rode our bikes. ¶¶(*The word bikes is used much more often in everyday speech like this. Bike is the shortened term for bicycles.*)
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    • Now, she come back her home to lunch, Now, I go to buy a perfume for her.
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    • Now, she comes back her home to lunch, Now, Iso i'll go to buy a perfume for her.
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    • Now, she come back her home to lunch, Now, I go to buy a perfume for her.¶After the bike ride, Xiomy decided to go home for lunch, while I decided to go shopping to buy her some perfume.
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