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My day

• Today was a day like the other.

• I woke up me at 7:00 am, then I took my breakfast and after I took my shower.

• When I was done, I went to see my boyfriend.

• We were all the afternoon together, but I was very tired so easily angry against him.

• So after 2 hours together, I prefered to come back to my home and see my family.

• We were hang out, we were outside in a garden in Paris.

• The weither was bad but we needed to take a rest.

• It was my day.