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The Sorceress

• In the darkest deaps of the forest there lived an old sorceress with powerful magic.

• She barely even went out of the forest.

• Of course she had to buy food and clothes but when she had to do it, she disguised herself so that nobody could recognise her.

• It was in the neerest village that she usually went to do her shopping.

• One day, while she was picking some fruits, a fight begun in the center of the market.

• Fights were very common in the market so the sorceress didn't bother to watch it.

• Meanwhile the seller who was talking to her gave a scream and ruched out of the store.

• The sorceress had no choice but to follow her because she had yet to pay her.

• Now the poor woman was in the middle of the fight trying helplessly to help a young man to raise himself from the ground.

• He was obviously his son.

• He seemed in a very bad shape.

• When she managed at last helping him standing, the seller was hit by one of the young men.

• He was as much surprised as the woman who let her son go, turned over to him and to the surprise of all the people watching the fight, she grabbed him by the collar and started slapping him with her dirty big hand.