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    • Last but not least, another problem is the poorly valued housework.
    • That is to say, today the housework done by housewives are considered invisible since many people think that this is an “easy work”.
    • At the same time, women must do the work at home for love to their family without any remuneration.
    • For example, a woman in Italy could face a sentence of two to six years in prison after his husband’s denouncement for "does not cook well and handle to cleaning the house”.
    • The way forward must be to change the policies in the countries.
    • Also, improve the education for girls, and thus increase opportunities of employment.
    • This could change the thought of society and the situation of many women.

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    • That is to say, today the housework done by housewives are considered invisible since many people think that this is an “easy work”.
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    • That is to sayo be more specific, today the housework done by housewives areis considered invisibleunimportant since many people think that ithis is an “easy workjob”.
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    • At the same time, women must do the work at home for love to their family without any remuneration.
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    • At the same time, women must do the work at home foto show their love tofor their familyies without any remuneration.
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    • For example, a woman in Italy could face a sentence of two to six years in prison after his husband’s denouncement for "does not cook well and handle to cleaning the house”.
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    • For example, a woman in Italy could face a sentence of two to six years in prison after hiser husband’s denouncement for "doesclaim of her not "cooking well and handle tonot cleaning the house”.
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