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    • At present, in many countries the work done by older women at home, does not receive the same benefits as men.
    • For most people, to be a housewife is not considered a job when so much effort and dedication is required.
    • However, the salary that they should receive annually is USD 74.000 approximately.
    • Taking this situation into account, this essay will examine the issue of discrimination, poorly valued housework, the believe of housewife as a natural obligation for the women, then some solutions will be provided.

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    • At present, in many countries the work done by older women at home, does not receive the same benefits as men.
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    • At present, in many countries the work done by older women doing work at home, does not receive the same benefits as men.
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    • For most people, to be a housewife is not considered a job when so much effort and dedication is required.
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    • For mMost people, to be a housewife is not considered don't consider being a housewife a job whilen so much effort and dedication is required.
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    • Taking this situation into account, this essay will examine the issue of discrimination, poorly valued housework, the believe of housewife as a natural obligation for the women, then some solutions will be provided.
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    • Taking this situation into account, this essay will examine the issue of discrimination, poorly valued housework, and the believef of housewife as a natural obligation ofor the women, then some solutions will be provided.
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