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Formal letter

• The Board of directors, I'm writing to express my concern about the closing of the Westgarth Cinema.

• I wish you know that Westgarth Cinema is is the treasure of our town.

• There were shown the hundreds premiere of the famous films.

• Every week our cinema provides citizens with an interesting perfomances.

• Moreover, there are 3 big malls in our town but only one big cinema.

• So we needn't malls any more,we need Westgarth Cinema.

• As well there are a lot of land and buildings for sale in the centre that can make way for the new shopping mall.

• I'm sure some of the solutions can be found and I look forward to receving your response.

• Yourth saithfully, Ann Parker.