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  • April 2nd.

    • Today is Monday, It's half past one, now I'm sitting on the grass and I have studied while a friend have been playing tennis.
    • After I'm going to drink eat something and will go to home and study for a test.
    • I have been studing for two weeks because I need past two test more and can will win the class.
    • Today is raining, it has been raining for all day, I have felt cold for all day, but now I'm wearing my favorite jacket.
    • The lunch was being for my girl, I like when she do the lunch because she knows cook very well.
    • Since I see the mail, I have been felt a concern, I don't know why, but I need to finish the homerwoks.

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  • 문장 1
    • Today is Monday, It's half past one, now I'm sitting on the grass and I have studied while a friend have been playing tennis.
      투표하세요!
    • Today is Monday, ¶It's half past one, now and I'm sitting on the grass and I have studied while a friend have beenfter studying and a friend of mine is playing tennis.
      투표하세요!
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  • 문장 3
    • I have been studing for two weeks because I need past two test more and can will win the class.
      투표하세요!
    • I have been studying for two weeks because I need to pasts two test more and can will winmore tests and then can clear theis class.
      투표하세요!
    • I have been studying for two weeks because I need to pasts two test more and can will wintests to finish the class.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • Today is raining, it has been raining for all day, I have felt cold for all day, but now I'm wearing my favorite jacket.
      투표하세요!
    • Today is raining, and it has been raining for all day, . I have feltbeen feeling cold for allwhole day, but now I'm wearing my favorite jacket.
      투표하세요!
    • Today is raining, it has been raining for all day,. I have felt cold for all day, but now I'm wearing my favorite jacket.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • The lunch was being for my girl, I like when she do the lunch because she knows cook very well.
      투표하세요!
    • The lunch was being for my girl,. I like when she do the lunch because she knows cooks very well.
      투표하세요!
    • The lunch was being for my girl,. I like it when she does the lunch because she knows how to cook very well.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • Since I see the mail, I have been felt a concern, I don't know why, but I need to finish the homerwoks.
      투표하세요!
    • Since I have seen the mail, I have been felt aam feeling concern,ed. I don't know why, but I need to finish themy homerworks. ¶
      투표하세요!
    • Since I seeaw the mail, I have been felt aeling concerned, I don't know why, but I need to finish the homerworks. ¶
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6