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    • Why english is

    • Long time ago, English is become a very important language. because it is every where in around of the world like an important language.
    • Because for the international business, english in the fisrt language.
    • But after english, we have spanish as other important language, french, chinese, japanese, corean and so well.
    • Is also important because it is a way to share cultures, experience...
    • I hope to improve my english by this way.
    • Thank you to Everyone!

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