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  • Cohesion

    • Taking into consideration with following comparing two types or approaches of study as : collaborative or in solitude naturally it is requires analization of the advantages for each method.
  • Obviously, after the short look, the opportunity to interact inside group of learners would be merely exposed for the first occasion and as opposed, the fact of maintaining high level of concentration at subject.
  • Instead of main points, that have been mentioned upper, continuous exploration of that theme will emerge with less noticeable facts, revealed below.
  • Instead of impelling to socialize frequently for a plenty number of theme, the participants of collective education fulfill the natural requirement of being estimated, involved in community.
  • Hence, the sense of safety enhances as well with time passing within society.
  • Another significant element which could be performed, are the circumstances for sharing an useful experience or probably reinforce somebody for goal completion through delegation resources to him.
  • However, acting in a large group roughly bounded with conceptions as distortion, distraction, that exist and flow simultaneously.
  • Learning subject without partners disclose another types of advantages such as profound focus, high dedication and utter recognition of every action.
  • For instance, main part of famous art or music creators, had been working only in condition of entire silence, that contributes immersion to subject for explorer.
  • And, indicated fact of possibility to discover a theme with lack of any bothering parameters attracts me completely to decision about exactly such approach for study.
  • By the way of conclusion, naturally both of assembled methods of study are depended specifically on person behavior.
  • Personaly in case of aspiration to study in condition of silince and undisturbing, for me the choice will be obvious, with thankful to study in group and advantages of socializing, I confidently will choose study in solitude place with no disturbing and atmosphere of deep immersion to disciple.

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    • Taking into consideration with following comparing two types or approaches of study as : collaborative or in solitude naturally it is requires analization of the advantages for each method.
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    • Taking into consideration withe following and comparing two types orf study approraches of study such as : collaborative or in solitude n. Naturally, it is requires analization analysis of the advantages for each method.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Obviously, after the short look, the opportunity to interact inside group of learners would be merely exposed for the first occasion and as opposed, the fact of maintaining high level of concentration at subject.
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  • Sentence 3
    • Instead of main points, that have been mentioned upper, continuous exploration of that theme will emerge with less noticeable facts, revealed below.
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    • Instead of impelling to socialize frequently for a plenty number of theme, the participants of collective education fulfill the natural requirement of being estimated, involved in community.
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    • Another significant element which could be performed, are the circumstances for sharing an useful experience or probably reinforce somebody for goal completion through delegation resources to him.
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    • However, acting in a large group roughly bounded with conceptions as distortion, distraction, that exist and flow simultaneously.
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    • Learning subject without partners disclose another types of advantages such as profound focus, high dedication and utter recognition of every action.
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  • Sentence 9
    • For instance, main part of famous art or music creators, had been working only in condition of entire silence, that contributes immersion to subject for explorer.
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    • And, indicated fact of possibility to discover a theme with lack of any bothering parameters attracts me completely to decision about exactly such approach for study.
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  • Sentence 12
    • Personaly in case of aspiration to study in condition of silince and undisturbing, for me the choice will be obvious, with thankful to study in group and advantages of socializing, I confidently will choose study in solitude place with no disturbing and atmosphere of deep immersion to disciple.
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