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Text from fajo - English

  • Drug is a problem

  • I read a text an another site who we learn english.
  • In according in this article, they talked about the gangs in America.
    • The kids are belonging of their father, uncles...as did their offspring.
  • These gangs reign is violence to improve their status and power in every cities.
  • The solution would be to stop the politicians to talk about the races when they mean these geographic areas who are stricken by drug gangs dealing.
  • They would be better to rehabilitate theses cities and to create recréational places for kids forward they become the wannabes.
  • The poverty, the bad family conditions and sometime child without parents push them to enjoin a gang.
  • At Réunion island, there are an hided market and deal of cannabis called zamal.
  • There are very little hard drugs.
  • Some people grow and sell zamal for money.
  • Fortunately, we haven't got crime or violence about that.
  • When the police intervenes, they can past some years in jeal because it's prohibited.
  • The cannabis can product wrong effects if you use it too much.
  • The wise advice would be to not smoke it if you're a beginner, and to remain in the pleasure if you're an accustomed.
  • Better quality than quantity.

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