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    • technology, human being and others

    • The most used thing for young people likely will be Internet and currently to communicate with people who are in opposite site of you at the earth it’s something quite normal.
    • And this is not all, because planes are faster than never and ships are able to take a thousand people for months.
    • The human being has become a master in technology and we don’t stop, we search for new discovers into earth like managing nature mother or conquering the mysterious space.
    • All this and much more it’s what human being is able to do and get.
  • But as it’s not gold everything which shines, we are also able of the worst.
  • We contaminate rivers and oceans; we hunt each sort of animal until some of them are almost exterminated or extinguished.
  • We kill each other only for gasoline, money, gold or interests.
  • We experiment with machines, animals and humans and we sometimes betray to others selfishly and in other case follow commands by fear, respect or believe.
  • In spite of those things that human being is able to do when we are born we still are innocents, playful and goods.
  • And this important thing continues in our lives throughout the whole life.
  • That is why we develop medicines for illness, economical support for poor people and altruistic actions for volunteer people who lives to help others.

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    • The most used thing for young people likely will be Internet and currently to communicate with people who are in opposite site of you at the earth it’s something quite normal.
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    • The most usedlikely thing forused now by young people likely will be Internet and currently to communicate with people who are in opposite sitde of you at the earth , it’s something quite normal too.
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    • And this is not all, because planes are faster than never and ships are able to take a thousand people for months.
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    • And this is not all, because planes are faster than never and ships are able to take a thousand people for months.
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      투표하세요!
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    • The human being has become a master in technology and we don’t stop, we search for new discovers into earth like managing nature mother or conquering the mysterious space.
      투표하세요!
    • The human being has become a master in technology and whe doesn’t stop, we here, he is searching for new discoveries into earth like managing nature mother or conquering the mysterious space.
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    • We contaminate rivers and oceans; we hunt each sort of animal until some of them are almost exterminated or extinguished.
      투표하세요!
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    • We experiment with machines, animals and humans and we sometimes betray to others selfishly and in other case follow commands by fear, respect or believe.
      투표하세요!
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    • In spite of those things that human being is able to do when we are born we still are innocents, playful and goods.
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    • That is why we develop medicines for illness, economical support for poor people and altruistic actions for volunteer people who lives to help others.
      투표하세요!
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