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  • The author of the passage stated that art of comic books and sphere en generally has been founded in America in earlier of 20th century , hence it was admitted that the spreading art of comic had the Pulizer brother as a first source.
  • But, in contrary with pointed conclusions we are being performed with slightly another view of author and with his thesis according to information.
  • In order to assemble each of the exhibited sights and figure out more relevant data, the paragraphs bellow are presented.
  • First point, that has broke thoughts about resemblance of both topics mainly contents of assumption, that active foundation and basis territory of developing comic style was rather Europe, neither America.
  • In a case of approval quotes from European journals and drafts from magazines have been presented.
  • And in a reference to their context, since beginning of 70th EU writers community was active.
  • And, in addition the speaker provides us with information, as opposed to fact - superman had been the first comic hero, evidently his status had been undermined and he got only second place, in a reference to messages about a novel "Asterix", which had been published in Europe a long before 1936 year.
  • That the addition point which would shove audience change their mind relatively to the time and a place of the first created comic book and mainly springs of the comedian genre.
  • However, despite of having plenty numbers of contraries and opposed notes, the some part of mutual approved and common true facts also take place in both of passages.
  • Apparently, as in an interference the idea about world spreading comic genre, and its gradual ascendancy all over the world nowadays, lead us to conclusion that in a lack of resemblance among opinions, the comic art have been successfully enhancing since foundation, and it does not a gross deal what was the main point of creation, generally a person in every place can obtain positive emotions after got acquainted with the art of comedy.

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  • Sentence 1
    • The author of the passage stated that art of comic books and sphere en generally has been founded in America in earlier of 20th century , hence it was admitted that the spreading art of comic had the Pulizer brother as a first source.
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  • Sentence 2
    • But, in contrary with pointed conclusions we are being performed with slightly another view of author and with his thesis according to information.
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    • First point, that has broke thoughts about resemblance of both topics mainly contents of assumption, that active foundation and basis territory of developing comic style was rather Europe, neither America.
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  • Sentence 7
    • And, in addition the speaker provides us with information, as opposed to fact - superman had been the first comic hero, evidently his status had been undermined and he got only second place, in a reference to messages about a novel "Asterix", which had been published in Europe a long before 1936 year.
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    • That the addition point which would shove audience change their mind relatively to the time and a place of the first created comic book and mainly springs of the comedian genre.
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  • Sentence 9
    • However, despite of having plenty numbers of contraries and opposed notes, the some part of mutual approved and common true facts also take place in both of passages.
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  • Sentence 10
    • Apparently, as in an interference the idea about world spreading comic genre, and its gradual ascendancy all over the world nowadays, lead us to conclusion that in a lack of resemblance among opinions, the comic art have been successfully enhancing since foundation, and it does not a gross deal what was the main point of creation, generally a person in every place can obtain positive emotions after got acquainted with the art of comedy.
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