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- Your feelings, experience tightened by the clouds of lifestyle and vanity thus I'm loosing hope to bring your love out.

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- Your feelings, experience tightened by the clouds of lifestyle and vanity thus I'm loosing hope to bring your love out.
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- Your feelings, and experience, tightened by the clouds of lifestyle and vanity ~~thus I'm~~, causes me to loos~~ing~~e hope toin bringing forth your love ~~out~~.
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