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  • April 12nd

    • Today is April 12nd, today is Friday, Today I'm sick, but it ain't so bad, because today I saw a friend that I don't saw since long long time.
    • When I saw her, I knew that she was my friend, then I ran to hug to her, she were in the hospital because she broke her leg.
    • The doctor (my cousin) said that she need see a blood type, then I went to the room where the nurse took my blood type, and later my cousin said to me: "yo are OK, you need rest" Last night, I sang all night a song that I hear on the radio.
    • I guess that I feel alone without Xiomy, she know that I might go for her but she doesn't want, because she is visiting her uncles.
  • This morning I felt that she called to me by my name, it was rare because always she call to me "chikis", was like I need her pamper.
    • Tomorrow I go to school, then I need my homework and it will be one lonely night, but all is on my mind, I need be strong and wait for her.

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  • Sentence 1
    • Today is April 12nd, today is Friday, Today I'm sick, but it ain't so bad, because today I saw a friend that I don't saw since long long time.
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    • Today is April 12nd, today is FridayFriday the 12 th of April, Today I'm sick, but it ain't so bad, because today I sawee a friend that I dohaven't saw since longeen her for long time.
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    • Today is April 12nd, today is Friday, TodayFriday, April the 12th. I'm sick, but it aisn't so bad, because today I saw a friend that I dohaven't saw sinceeen in a long long time.
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  • Sentence 2
    • When I saw her, I knew that she was my friend, then I ran to hug to her, she were in the hospital because she broke her leg.
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    • When I saw her, I knew that she was my friend, then I ran to hug to her, she wereas in the hospital because she had broken her leg.
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    • When I saw her, I knew that she was my friend, then I ran to hug to her, she wereAs my eyes laid upon her, I immediately recognized her and ran to hug her. She had been in the hospital because she had broken her leg.
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  • Sentence 3
    • The doctor (my cousin) said that she need see a blood type, then I went to the room where the nurse took my blood type, and later my cousin said to me: "yo are OK, you need rest" Last night, I sang all night a song that I hear on the radio.
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    • The doctor (my cousin) said that she needs to see a bloodher my type, then I went to the room where the nurse took my blood type, and later my cousin said to me: "yoYou are OK, you need some rest"¶¶Last night, I sang all night a song that I've heard on the radio.
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  • Sentence 4
    • I guess that I feel alone without Xiomy, she know that I might go for her but she doesn't want, because she is visiting her uncles.
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    • I guess that I feel alone without Xiomy, she knows that I might go for her but she doesn't want, because she is visiting her uncles.
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  • Sentence 5
    • This morning I felt that she called to me by my name, it was rare because always she call to me "chikis", was like I need her pamper.
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  • Sentence 6
    • Tomorrow I go to school, then I need my homework and it will be one lonely night, but all is on my mind, I need be strong and wait for her.
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    • Tomorrow I'll go to school, then I need my homework to be done and it will be one lonely night, but all is on my mind, I need to be strong and wait for her.
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