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  • Is the internet a danger ?

  • However, as pretty much everything, the internet presents some disadvantages.
  • As I said before, the internet evolves very fast and fasten everything.
  • So processes that required some time before can now take only a few minutes or even seconds, like for examplke, spreading an information.
  • Before the internet, it took some time to bring the whole world up to date.
  • It can be good for some things but devastating for other things.
  • For instance with the internet, it is really easy to destroy someone's reputation.
    • I mean if informations can spread troughout the internet, so can gossips and bad words or even private pictures.
    • This things known as cyber bullyibg is really something to worry about because it can destroy a life and it leads sometimes some people to suicide (mostly teenager, whose some really private pictures has been released online without consent)

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    • So processes that required some time before can now take only a few minutes or even seconds, like for examplke, spreading an information.
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    • I mean if informations can spread troughout the internet, so can gossips and bad words or even private pictures.
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    • I mean, if informations can spread throughout the internet, so can gossips and, bad words orand even private pictures.
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    • This things known as cyber bullyibg is really something to worry about because it can destroy a life and it leads sometimes some people to suicide (mostly teenager, whose some really private pictures has been released online without consent)
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    • This things known as cyber bullyibng is really something to worry about because it can destroy a lifelives and it may leads sometimes some people to commit suicide (mostly teenagers, whose some really private pictures hasmay have been released online without consent)¶
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