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- My dream
- Hello When i chaild , i always dream to be a teacher ^_^ , And my mother and father help me to get these dream.
- Now, I'm teacher ( for physics) and i feel good for that .
- My new dream now ( learn english very will) l hope to get it with you ^_^

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- Hello When i chaild , i always dream to be a teacher ^_^ , And my mother and father help me to get these dream.
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- Hello ¶When iI was a chaild , iI always dream ~~to be~~t of becoming a teacher ^_^ , And my mother and father helped me to get th~~ese~~is dream.
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- Hello ¶When i was a chaild , iI would always dream tof becoming a teacher ^_^ ~~, And m~~ My mother and father helped me to ~~get these~~achieve this dream.
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- Now, I'm teacher ( for physics) and i feel good for that .
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- Now, I'm ~~teacher ( for physics)~~a physics teacher and iI feel good ~~for~~about that .
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- My new dream now ( learn english very will) l hope to get it with you ^_^
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- My new dream now ( is to learn english very wiell) l hope to get it with you ^_^
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- My ~~new~~ dream now (is to learn eEnglish very wiell). l hope to ~~get it~~accomplish this with your help. ^_^
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