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- What I feeling today
- Hi everybody Today I take holiday from my work because I feeling tired and I've cold.
- I spend most day on bed and I drunk some tea,but now I feeling myself better, So tomorrow I want go to work.
- after few I want watch movie on Tv with dinner.
- And I hope tomorrow be better.

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- What I feeling today
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- What I am feeling today.
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- Hi everybody Today I take holiday from my work because I feeling tired and I've cold.
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- Hi everybody !¶Today, I t~~ake holiday~~ook a leave of absence from my work because I was feeling tired and I've got cold.
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- I spend most day on bed and I drunk some tea,but now I feeling myself better, So tomorrow I want go to work.
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- I spend most of day on my bed and I drunk some tea, but now I feel~~ing myself~~ much better,¶S so tomorrow I ~~want go~~am going back to work.
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- after few I want watch movie on Tv with dinner.
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- ~~¶af~~Later ~~few I want~~that night I watched a movie ~~on Tv with~~while eating dinner.
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- And I hope tomorrow be better.
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- ~~And I hope~~With the hopes that tomorrow would be better. ¶
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