Korrekturen

Work

• On the weekend, I work with my father.

• When I am working there, I am exploring my strengths in employment area and improving my personal background. .

• Moreover, my strengths in community services I am good at relationships with people.

• It makes easy to be achievable in taking responsibility. .

• I sold our creative stuff like knitted coat and grant the all income for orphan children in this charity service.

• Malcolm Watts touched a good point about university, it is like a iceberg we only know little thing before university.