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    • february 13th.

    • Today is Wednesday, Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics, I met a friend and I have told: men I have passed the exam, then, he said to me, "compa, wait for me and go to stadium".
    • well after we went walk to the gate with other friend and we took a bikes. well, when we were in the stadium a car had crashed other car and my friend, "do you want a milk shake?".
  • When I had already drunk I said : "I have never drunk such a tasty drink" But the wrong way was that we have returned home walking.

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    • Today is Wednesday, Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics, I met a friend and I have told: men I have passed the exam, then, he said to me, "compa, wait for me and go to stadium".
      투표하세요!
    • Today is Wednesday, ¶Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics, I met a friend and I have told: men I have passed the exam, then, he said to me, "compa, wait for me and go to the stadium".
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    • well after we went walk to the gate with other friend and we took a bikes. well, when we were in the stadium a car had crashed other car and my friend, "do you want a milk shake?".
      투표하세요!
    • well after we went walk to the gate with other friend and we took a bikes. well, when we were in the stadium a car had crashed other car and my friend, "do you want a milk shake?".
      Sakthi03Sakthi03 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • When I had already drunk I said : "I have never drunk such a tasty drink" But the wrong way was that we have returned home walking.
      투표하세요!
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