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Testo da Cornie - English

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Offical Email Messages
- Dear PB Company my Name is Cornie I'm interested to apply for the Jobs that you offer in FJ as an Admin Exceutive or a Packer in the Online Premium Store.
- I hope i can be the one of workers on your Company please take care of me

CornieApril 2016Vota adesso!
- Segnala come spam?

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

Titolo
- Offical Email Messages
  Vota adesso!
- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Titolo
Frase 1
- Dear PB Company my Name is Cornie I'm interested to apply for the Jobs that you offer in FJ as an Admin Exceutive or a Packer in the Online Premium Store.
  Vota adesso!
- Dear PB Company:¶¶mMy Nname is Cornie~~¶¶I'm interested to apply for the Jobs that you offer in FJ as an Admin~~____. I see that you have advertised some jobs in _______. I would like to apply for the position of Administrative Excecutive or athe position of Packer in the Online Premium Store.
  MaverickMom Commenti 1
  
  Segnala come spam?
  
  Vota adesso!
- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1
Frase 2
- I hope i can be the one of workers on your Company please take care of me
  Vota adesso!
- I ~~hope i can be the one of workers on your Company¶please take care of me~~know I will be an asset for your Company.¶Thank you for your consideration.
  MaverickMom Commenti
  
  Segnala come spam?
  
  Vota adesso!
- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2