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  • America

  • Hello can you help me ?
  • I'm going to deal with the notion « Spaces and Exchanges ».
    • First, and exchange is an act of giving, and receiving something else in return.
  • Exchanges can be a circulation too.
  • This exchanges can be about trades, relations, or TV.
    • Nowadays, more and more people are going abroad for differents reasons.
  • This reasons can be professional, cultural, academic or personal.
  • People can migrate to Europe, Asia, but they are mainly migrating to America.
  • But why are people migrating to America ?
    • First, I'm going to talk about the reasons of immigration, in a second part I'm going to deal with the migrations to America and then, I'm going to talk about what does immigration brings to America

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