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  • franck french boy

    • Hi everybody , my name is Franck I'm from Paris I speak already italian y spanish but my level in English is very bad like many Frenchpeople :).
    • So Im 23 years old and I have 3 brother I'm the older son in the family.
    • My hobbies are sport in general and love play music with guitar and piano but its very hard :) I enjoy travel all around the world to see many country with their own culturs :).
    • In Paris, I work in bakery-pastry "ladurée" and love my job : make pastry and viennoise bread (croissant and chocolate bread).
    • I hope i did not make lot of faults. Thanks

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    • Hi everybody , my name is Franck I'm from Paris I speak already italian y spanish but my level in English is very bad like many Frenchpeople :).
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    • Hi everybody , my name is Franck and I'm from Paris. I speak already speak italian yand spanish, but my level in English level is very badlow, like many French people :).
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    • Hi everybody , my name is Franck I'm from Paris I speak already italian y& spanish but my level in English is very badpoor like many French people :).
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    • Hi everybody , my name is Franck and I'm from Paris. I speakcan already ispeak Italian y sand Spanish, but my level in English is very badlow, like many French people :).
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    • My hobbies are sport in general and love play music with guitar and piano but its very hard :) I enjoy travel all around the world to see many country with their own culturs :).
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    • My hobbies are sports in general and I love play music wiing the guitar and the piano but, even if it's very hard :) I enjoy to travel all around the world to see many country withand their own cultures :).
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    • My hobbies are sports in general and I love playing music withon my guitar and piano, but its very hard :) I enjoy travelling all around the world to seeand visiting many countryies with their own cultures :).
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    • My hobbies are sport in generalI enjoy most sports, and love play music wiing the guitar and piano but its very hard :) I enjoy travel all around the world to see many country with(which I find very difficult :-)). I also enjoy travelling, so I can see different countries and experience their own culturs :).es. :-)
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    • In Paris, I work in bakery-pastry "ladurée" and love my job : make pastry and viennoise bread (croissant and chocolate bread).
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    • In Paris, I work in bakery-pastry "ladurée" and love my job : makeing pastry and viennoise bread (croissant and chocolate bread).
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    • In Paris, I work in a bakery-/pastry "ladurée" andin Paris. I love my job : makeing pastry and viennoise bread (croissant and chocolate bread).
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