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Text from gustavoadolfo - English

    • Discovering the wolrd

    • Hi world, I´m writing this again, because I had to get in again to my count, It doesn´t matter, I´m listening Don´t shoot me Santa (the killers) while I write.
    • My name is Gustavo, I´m Pharmacist Chemist, I live in Perú (ceviche, pisco, Machipicchu, that´s right It is Perú) to be more specific in Callao, near to the beach a little dirty by the pollution, but sometimes the waves and the sun amuse me, I´m 27 and I would like to travel around the world, learning new thing, new friends, new adventures, but for this I need money; I worked in an office and earned my money, but I left everything, less my family (parents and brothers) but the thing It didn´t happen like I wanted, in this moment I´m doing my tesis, a then I don´t know what happen to me, Do you know?, I have two roads, searching a Master degree in Biochemistry in other country (one of the reason that I´m improve my English) or try to get into Medicine University (One of my dreams, I want to die helping people).
    • My favorite band is 30 STM, I love Jared, wait I like the girls, so you shouldn´t to think bad in any way, but is Jared.
    • Well If you can help me with my English, I will teach you Spanish, or If you are lost like me and you know English, edit me rigth now! See you.

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  • Sentence 1
    • Hi world, I´m writing this again, because I had to get in again to my count, It doesn´t matter, I´m listening Don´t shoot me Santa (the killers) while I write.
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    • Hi world, I´m writing this again, because I had to get login again to my count,he site. It doesn´t matter, I´m listening 'Don´t shoot me Santa (the killers)' while I writing here.
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    • Hi world, I´m writing this again, because I had to get in again log into my account, I again, but it doesn´t matter, as I´m listening to "Don´t sShoot mMe Santa" (the killers) while I write.
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  • Sentence 2
    • My name is Gustavo, I´m Pharmacist Chemist, I live in Perú (ceviche, pisco, Machipicchu, that´s right It is Perú) to be more specific in Callao, near to the beach a little dirty by the pollution, but sometimes the waves and the sun amuse me, I´m 27 and I would like to travel around the world, learning new thing, new friends, new adventures, but for this I need money; I worked in an office and earned my money, but I left everything, less my family (parents and brothers) but the thing It didn´t happen like I wanted, in this moment I´m doing my tesis, a then I don´t know what happen to me, Do you know?, I have two roads, searching a Master degree in Biochemistry in other country (one of the reason that I´m improve my English) or try to get into Medicine University (One of my dreams, I want to die helping people).
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    • My name is Gustavo, I´m a Pharmacist Chemist, I live in Perú (ceviche, pisco, Machipicchu, that´s right It is Perú) to be more specific in Callao, near to the beach it' s a little bit dirty by'cause the pollution, but sometimes the waves and the sun amuse me, I´m 27 and I would like to travel around the world, learning new things, making new friends, taking new adventures, but for thisthough I need money; for those stuff. I worked in an office and, I earned my money, but and I left everything, less but my family (parents and brothers) but the thing Itlife didn´'t happen like I wanted, in this moment I´m doinggo as I wished.Now,I´m working on my tesis, a thenso I don´t know what will happen to me, Do you know that?, I have two roadways, searchingeking for a Master degree in Biochemistry in other country ies(one of the reason that I´m improve my English) or try to get into Medicine University (One of my dreams, I want to die helping people till death).
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    • My name is Gustavo, and I´m Pa pharmacist Chemist,. I live in Perúu (ceviche, pisco, Machipicchu, that´s right It i! That's Perú)u), to be more specific in Callao, near to the beach. The beach is a little dirty byecause of all the pollution, but I sometimes enjoy the waves and the sun amuse me,. I´m 27 and I would like to travel around the world, learning new thing,s, making new friends, having new adventures, but for this I need money;. I worked in an office and earned my money, but I left everything, less behind except my family (parents and brothers) but the t. Thing Its didn´'t happen like I wanted, inturn out the way I wanted them to. At thise moment, I´m doing my thesis, a then. After that, I don´'t know what will happen to me,. Do you know?, I have two roads, searchpossible paths: the first is seeking a Master degree in Biochemistry in another country (one of the reason that I´ms why I´m trying to improve my English) orand the second trying to get into Medicine Uat university (Othat's one of my dreams, - I want to die helping people).
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  • Sentence 3
    • My favorite band is 30 STM, I love Jared, wait I like the girls, so you shouldn´t to think bad in any way, but is Jared.
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    • My favorite band is 30 STM, I love Jared, w. Wait! I like the girls, so you shouldn´t to think bad in any way, make wrong thoughts about that but it's Jared.,you know?!
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    • My favorite band is 30 STM,; I love Jared, w. Wait! I like the girls, so you shouldn´t to think bad in any way, butread anything into that, but Jared is Jared...
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  • Sentence 4
    • Well If you can help me with my English, I will teach you Spanish, or If you are lost like me and you know English, edit me rigth now! See you.
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    • Well If you can help me with my English, I will teach you Spanish, or I. Or, if you are lost like me and you knowcan speak English, editwrite to me rigtht now! See you.
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