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    • Dear Mrs or Mr, You’re looking for a International Financial Manager I’m currently looking for a new challenging position to push further my international work experiences.
    • I had the opportunities to work in financial services in different large companies over a period of five years.
    • This enabled me to acquire efficiently skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and industrial sector, by being confronted to the management issues, that you have expressed in your job vacation.
    • I have been also confronted within my last position as controller or business Analyst to direct or indirect English speaker partners, which has enabled me to assimilate proficiently the international business language.
    • I am confident that I can perform the job and excited about the idea of working for your company.
    • If you would like to schedule an interview tp discuss my interest on this job application.
    • I will be available at your convenience.
    • Thank you for your consideration.
  • Yours Sincerely, AZOUGARH Salim.

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    • Dear Mrs or Mr, You’re looking for a International Financial Manager I’m currently looking for a new challenging position to push further my international work experiences.
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    • Dear MrsSir or Mr, ¶¶You’adam, ¶¶I understand you are looking for an International Financial Manager¶¶I’m currently looking for a new challenging position to push further my international work experiences.
    • Dear Mrs or Mr, ¶¶You’Sir/Madam ¶¶I realized that you are looking for an International Financial Manager.¶I am currently looking for a new challenging position to push further my international work experiences.
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    • This enabled me to acquire efficiently skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and industrial sector, by being confronted to the management issues, that you have expressed in your job vacation.
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    • This has enabled me to acquire efficiently acquire skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and the industrial sector, by being confronted to withe management issues, that you havewhich was expressed in yourthe job vacation.
    • This has enabled me to acquire efficiently acquire require skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and industrial sectors, by beingenabling me to confronted towith the managementrial issues, that you havare expressed in yourthe job vacation.
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    • I have been also confronted within my last position as controller or business Analyst to direct or indirect English speaker partners, which has enabled me to assimilate proficiently the international business language.
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    • I have been also confronted withDuring my last position as controller or bBusiness Analyst to direct or indirect, I have also been directly and indirectly confronted with English speakering partners, which has enabled me to assimilate proficiently the international business language proficiently.
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