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Text from nawen01 - English

    • Story in english

  • This is the story of a joyful young French pensioner Billy who lives in a small house in the countryside.
    • He leaves for his, old, narrow, wooden hut in the forest which he built when he was a child.
  • He walks in the peaceful, shallow stream with a big smile.
  • When he arrives, he decides to observe the moon with an ancient refracting telescope.
    • But he makes a frightful discovery, the moon disappeared.
  • He is very unhappy.
  • After some time, he finds a letter on the floor.
    • It's a letter written by the moon, in which she writes she is sad because nobody is interested in it.
    • Billy is very effected after he reads this letter, and so decides to look for the moon.
    • However, in his letter, the moon decides to reappear in order to help prove to the moon that Billy likes it.
  • The first mission is to make a bouquet of flowers, but the moon is demanding and wants very special flowers, which are obviously very rare.
  • Billy finishes this mission after many adventures .
  • Indeed, he fell in the stinging nettle, and was pricked by a wasp's nest.
  • Billy is very exhausted and he decides to put off, for an another day, the next mission.
  • After the break, Billy sets off again to adventure with the second mission.
  • This mission is to draw, in ink, a portrait of someone who is magnificent.
  • However Billy doesn't have ink, and must to find it to finish his mission.
  • Billy walked for some hours because he couldn't find a supermarket that sells the ink.
  • When he arrives in a village, Billy is relieved.
    • He has found ink, and he draws the moon, but he is sad because in the portrait he doesn't have the colors he needs.
  • When he finishes this mission, Billy decides to return to his wooden hut.
  • Now he is happy, because when arrived that night, Billy looked in a refracting telescope and he saw a crescent moon.
  • He thinks it is a sign of the part of the moon that shows a little recognition of the effort that Billy gave.
  • One last mission remains to Billy in order for the moon to come back in the sky.
  • The last mission is very difficult, indeed; the moon wishes to recover the beauty of his youth.
  • However, this mission is complicated, because the moon is in the sky, and Billy on the ground, so Billy looks for a good way to handle this mission.
  • Suddenly Billy had an idea.
  • Instead of restoring him his youth beauty.
  • He writes him a poem.
  • In this poem, he declares him the love which he carries in his glittering light.  Especially as he admits him he cannot live without her in the sky.
  • When the moon read this poem, she is very moves.
  • She was so much affected, that she stopped being sad she and thus resumed her place of light when the night fell.

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